The Regs

you can check out our Story forum, were i am currently roughing out a new story i'm writeing. its currently titled Adagio.

For those who haven't read it yet the full current rough drafting can be found

HERE

since i have went though and added and removed some stuff from the main body of work it might be best to re read the full current story again even if you had read it all prior to the nov 18 update.

If you have read the Story up to this point and feel like just reading the newest added portion it can be found

HERE

Thoughts and comment to help improve the story are welcome as it is still in a very rough state. i'd like to be able to refine it, this is all a big experiment on my part.

i must warn you that although the narrative is decent the dialogue i feel is weak as i've been suffering a bout with writers block, so the conversations come off as a bit hoky. but felt the dialogue needed to be in there to at least denote that that is where some form of it should be

thx

Silver

haha, no Adagio is a movement in music, a slow and steady pace set

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and yes

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